Painfully bad

Floor Four - A. Lopez Jr.

I am a huge fan or ghost stories so when this novella was offered for free on the Kindle, I snatched it up. I wanted to like this story. I tried to like the story, but quite honestly the only reason it got one star instead of none was because it was free.

I am sorry to say that the writing is just awful. It is written in an extremely passive voice and no character is fleshed out enough for the reader to give a damn what happens. I liked the premise for the story but it simply collapses under the juvenile writing. Truly, undeniably BAD.